Oh my Fuckin Do you realize how annoying it is when you don’t switch paragraphs when a new character is speaking Do you realize how confusing it is I don’t care if they’re using one-word responses at each other, start a new damn paragraph. ESPECIALLY IF YOU HAVE MORE THAN ONE CHARACTER.
dear christ this. no more walls of text please. please.
These are things 4th graders should know…who doesn’t know this???
Only Hope was left within her unbreakable house, she remained under the lip of the jar, and did not fly away. Before [she could], Pandora replaced the lid of the jar. This was the will of aegis-bearing Zeus the Cloudgatherer.